Okay, but *Ouch* distortion
You made a very catchy tune here.
I like the sounds you used.
Nice layering of those different melodies too.
I like how you continue with one melody and than change the melodie on top.
Now, why I only gave you 7 :
There's a lot of distortion on your kicks.
You could have used some more variation, I hear the same melodies coming back all the time. Also a nice breakdown somewhere in the middle wouldn't have been bad. and after the breakdown you just start with a brand new theme.
Some tips for this distortion :
Use a compressor, play around with it a bit until you hav nice kicks without htis crackling sound.
I hope my review was useful to you, It's one of my longer ones.
Greetings and good luck,
MICHhimself